Logo Crit
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- Nairn0
whatever happened to dotting is and crossing ts?
- Nairn0
'your package goes around in circles'
- DavidFelt0
hmmm, not very constructive today Nairn. The reason a circle is used is to emphasise the 'global' nature of his brand, it also has connotations of a wheel and the earth.
Anyone else?
- Nairn0
my apologies - those were my thoughts.
x
- uncle_helv0
Like it Felt, although the Express looks a bit floaty (if that makes sense) why not try ranging the express under the 'O' it would tighten it up.
- rasko40
its got potential but somethings not quite complete, I dont like the slant of the express, I would keep that straight and have it ranged up so it fits between the top of the e and its crossbar, if you know what I mean.
- neue75_bold0
the "l" is a bit strange. I can see that your using the same curved bit from your other letters, but I think the tail is a bit too dramatic...
overall nice and simple
- doesnotexist0
for being for a global shipping company it sure is hard to read. maybe emphasize the O more then if youre going for global...and that express thing isnt looking too good slanted. needs more kerning too? maybe make it have more connexion to the main "logo" and not just shooting off its ass.
- rasko40
I prefer it but I think it looks too long, I would explore other configurations, maybe reverse the polarity or use some fresh dilithium crystals.
- neue75_bold0
yep, fresh dilithium crystals...
- kyl30
at first I read coroline, then i thought of a record label, then I remembered the last version and thought those had more potential.
needs to be stronger and more masculine, IMO
- asprin0
How about giving the word 'express' a wooden crate / rubber stamp treatment and having it stamped below 'cargoline' but at a slightly turned angle so it maybe overlaps or creates some intresting interplay with the cargoline text. Something along the line of a package that has been stamped express.
- Nairn0
"How about giving the word 'express' a wooden crate / rubber stamp treatment "
DEFINITELY.
- asprin0
and while we're at it (the synapse are firing this morning)....
how about making the word 'go" in cargoline a different color instead of just the "o"... GO has a very specific idea associated with it and especially when you add the express below, it would create the sense for..
go express!!
:D
- Dancer0
I ain't feeling this at all.
THe relationship between the G O and L is very off putting.
Looks more like a record label logo than an express co.
Needs a fresh look IMO.
sorry man
D!!
- djmindbender0
express should go to the lower right underneath cargoline. It is an addition to the name and a minor player in the overall logo not the primary focus and should not float to the top right, right or anywhere else.
- rasko40
nice creative attitude there djbender
- Crouwel0
'your package goes around in circles'
Nairn
(Jan 28 06, 06:25)lmao