logo crit
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- Spix
what you guys think if this logo?
http://www.victoriavalleyvineyar…
- neenaw0
It looks like a spastic spider fell in an ink well and then ran right accross the page.
- neenaw0
What I mean by that is the mark is a little loose. Needs tightened. A lot.
- epill_0
it took a few seconds to realize it was 3 separate letter 'v' it looks like letter 'c' in with it.
without the verbage on the bottom saying what it is, the logo on its own is hard to understand.
- dirtydesign0
Looks unfinished.
- Spix0
epill, that is true...it dies kind of like a C in there...
- gruntt0
it doesn't do it for me.
sorry.
- digilee0
thicker on the outer circle then tighten it up a bit.
- epill_0
try to incorporate some graphics with vines, make the logo more dynamic. it does look un-finished and the curvature of the fonts in the logo dont match the verbage on the bottom.
plus the "cv" in the center of the logo reminds me of curriculum vitae too much and then makes me think i need to update my resume too.
dammit!!!
:)
- Gucci0
it almost looks like it's trying to say something, but is missing the mark.
Is it representative of an ideal or is it supposed to be a picture? Maybe we're missing something here....
- bulletfactory0
the kerning on the words below the mark need to be tightend as well
- agentfour0
too messy. theres stuff goin everywhere
- Spix0
thanks for the respons...I did not make the logo, but the i know the people who owns the vineyard, and i thought i would give them some examples..but then I also needs to tell them the situation with their current logo...all in a tacktfull way ofcourse.
- Baskerville0
You're lucky you've got 'vvv' to work with. You could do something really nice with it. Aside from the nice geometic patterns you could make with it. You can also play with it more.
I knocked this up in about 30 seconds as an example. How about 3 V's made of 'grapes' making up a bunch?
be more creative!
- gruntt0
Just tell them they N N Need a N N New logo.
=)
good luck. telling a client their logo doesn't work can be a tough sell.
- epill_0
why not propose them a bunch of new logo designs and tell them that with your new mastapeeza their first quarter sales will double and their 4th quarter sales with triple and all because of your new design.
do the logo for free bottles of vino!!!!
- level2b0
I agree with the resy of the comments.
Finally a logo crit that isn't one of those frilly ornamental pieces..
:)
- Spix0
gruntt: that is true...not sure how to go about it....but i dont want to hurt their pride.
epill: good idea....a years supllie of free vine would be ok..
- Spix0
baskerville: i agree, and as i said, i did not do the logo.
- epill_0
why not get them to market a bottle of wine after you, and make some money off their drug!!!
:)
- Dancer0
Agree with what the others say.
I looks so unfinished it's ridiculous CV was what I saw and then I realised that it was 3 v's from the name.
haha, Baskerville had to get a pearl necklace in there ;)
and the relation between the type and the mark is v.bad