Katrina benefit CD cover crit
Katrina benefit CD cover crit
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- asprin
http://www.tsegadinka.com/projec…
Looking to get some feedback on this. Thankyou.
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- jimeeboy510
try 1-2 more comps and repost, unless you're set on this one being crit alone. I personally think it can use some more work, more creative typography.
- determinedmoth0
I think you need to add the tagline:
"GET A KAYAK!"
- kelpie0
the "a benefit album..." type needs work - looks slapped on as an after thought. Also, may just be the jpg, but to my eye it could do with more definition, looks all stuck in the same tonal range.
Not too far off though if that's what floats your boat (so to speak :/)