Portfolio Crit
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- silentseven
Ok so heres the deal I am on the East Coast (Wash DC) trying to get to the West Coast (So Cal Area). I am going all out full speed trying to get all my work ready. I have a couple ports one flash and one html.
I also tossed up my resume and work sample, for some brusing.
I need some feedback on the work and sites since I think I have been looking at both way too long.
So here are the links and crit away...
Flash
http://www.silent7.comHTML One Page
http://1pg.silent7.comResume (PDF)
http://www.silent7.com/jwitters-…Work Sample (PDF)
http://www.silent7.com/jwitters-…Thanks
- deadpixels0
like the work alot, with both the flash and the html up I prefered using the html one, less of a hassle finding your way around. For the html one you could make the thumbnails bigger though, kind of defeats the piont of using thumbnails when you can't work out what the links going to be
- chz0
your HTML site wouldn't load for me.
- silentseven0
every works for me..
Thats what most people are saying is ditch the flash one too hard to see the work especially for a job position not just to show off the work.
Thanks
- version30
the flash took ages to load on ff win xp slow and choppy it was
- jevad0
I like the flash site cos it really shows you have a grasp with AS and motion...but it is a bit clunky to get around. If I were going through your work looking to hire you I would check that out first...but then go to your one page site to look at your work...so I would make the images on your site a lot bigger, like so:
- silentseven0
jevad the images on the 1pg site bigger?
- jevad0
MUCH bigger
- silentseven0
aight cool
- chz0
does not load for me.
- kyl30
wa wa wa wa yy yy tt tt ttoo ch ch ch oo oo ppy on my mm mm maaa c
osx 10.4
- jevad0
lol
- silentseven0
damn flash
I thought I had that shite working good. I should have just stuck with the html 1pg
- chz0
Safari 1.3.2
FF 1.0.7
- silentseven0
wtf
- jevad0
chris - are you sure your computar is connected to the innernets?
- chz0
i'm pretty sure... lemme check the cable.
- chz0
no luck in IE 5.2 either... can you fax the site over?... thanks.
- lmao0
html sucks
- silentseven0
lol
aight im going make a copy in a new directory to see if you can see it.
please hold.....