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- lnu0
I think you're definately ion to something with the bottom one, looks like it could have been a logo for a cassette tape company. But the white lines between the letters are way too thin.
- Dancer0
He's back and working on a weekend!!
I like the look of it, reminds me of Tetris (< maybe a bit 80's).
I prefered the last one though.
Have you tried hitching the "t" above the "e", and then re-looking at the "e" cause it looks like a "q".
Do I make any sense?
- Dancer0
BTW I was on about the top one
- DavidFelt0
hey that might work dancer! you working on a sat too? I cant get enough of it!!!! haha, I prefer this one i must say, much more legible and i reckon it will be easier to work with... The bottom one is my fav, gonna maybe try what you said, but dont you think that the'e' being like that makes the 'a' look odd?????
- Dancer0
Yeah got a deadline on Monday and tuesday :/
I don't think you need to worry about the relationship between the e and the a. You're not designing a typeface you designing a mark (remember what you said about the last one you did).
To me this has more balance.
Keep pluggin though.
Let me know when your done.
I'm out
D
- poomoo0
i thought the older versions were much better.
- bradpitt0
I like the ones you had up couple of days back. This just looks too cluttered.
- nosaj0
I dig 'em. I also really liked the old one. I can see this logo becoming illegible when smaller though. The white between each character will get lost at half the size.
- DavidFelt0
BUMP
- kelpie0
mmm, not sure about these new ones - I reckon you could be onto something with a bit more work, but at the mo I prefer the other ones. These could prove to be better though, but at the mo I don't like them as much. sorry mate :/
- DavidFelt0
Im gonna make the gaps in these a bit bigger, work em up to a higher level of finish, ive printed it quite small and it looks cool, so legibility isnt a massive issue with these.
I also personally think the others were a bit too 'busy', no????
- kelpie0
agreed yes, but I think the shapes knitted together in a more visualy pleasing way. To be honest that's the only thing for me, this could be easily better, I just don't think the same harmony is there yet :)
- DavidFelt0
cheers kelpie, thought i better bump it today for you all seeing as only me and dancer were committed enough to be working this weekend!!!!!! haha
- kelpie0
haha, you think I'm on here when I'm working at home? pfft. I like to get work done when I'm not in my place of employment ;)
- DavidFelt0
haha, come on guys, ive me some opinions here!!!!!!!
- Crouwel0
what are all those penii hanging there on your logo, raspo?
- rasko40
they are penii