CRIT (BCard)
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- skt0
1. aye, sort of
2. hang on a minute...
3: not as dated as 45 degree angles.
- version30
LL45DA
- waynepixel0
Good
- chossy0
get rif of the black bits, and the pink triangles.
- todelete__20
print that mutha
- designaked0
Info side = white
then print.
love it. good stuff.
- kelpie0
1) yes, but do what chossy said
2) aye, more or less.
3) a bit.
- horton0
sorry but i've never understood why designers come online here asking others to crit their own business card.. ?
- kelpie0
yup.
- andreasm0
horton. because you need a second opinion and everyone else left the office.
- phatlee0
Whats the point of the illustration? Couldn't you just have your details and keep it minimal?
- kelpie0
*yawn
- jevad0
lovely
- todelete__20
get rif of the black bits, and the pink triangles.
chossy
(Nov 16 05, 09:00)yeah i'll second that. distracting.
- rasko40
You will never get serif type to print that small even if it was straight reversed out of the dark brown - but is that a third colour/tint for the type?
What point size is that anyway? I'm all for small type but youre taking the piss I think
- horton0
i'll eat my foot on previous crit comments...
rasko4 is right. if that midgrey is a screen of any of the darker inks there's no way it'll be legible.
it would have to be a solid ink on its own, and even then the serifs are gonna collapse under the bleed of the dark grey flood.
- radar0
Yeah, I agree making the info side white or atleast partially white, it's main purpose is to give your contact info to someone else and that gray text on a dark background is gonna be hard to read.
- Rand0
I have printed the entire new testament on the head of a pin and it was perfectly legible, sir
- rasko40
how big was the pin oh wise one?