LOGO Crit
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This is a logo I did for the Foundation of Contemporary Art DESTE.
Comments please
www.angeloplessas.com/deste/logo…...
- jimeeboy510
relink please
- UndoUndo0
works well cross language.
- rename0
Deste in Greek is imperative of the verb SEE. Shall I make the eye (tone) more clear?
- UndoUndo0
eye tone?? i'm not sure what you mean?
- rename0
I mean that in greek we put a dot (accent) over some letters. From this I wanted to make an EYE
- who0
Sorry I can’t see the eye...
You must make an eye because in Greek “deste” sometimes means tie.
IMHO.... It’s too packed up. Me pnigei.
- UndoUndo0
go for it..see what it looks like...sounds a bit tacky but could work
- Bluejam0
typeface looks too heavy, (i'd like to see the logo at a smaller size) makes the logo seem very 'bulky' and at odds with what it is supposed to represent.
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as a logo, it looks like something that could date very easily.
- silencer0
I'd like to see a version with more spacing between the letters. Otherwise it's really nice.
- silencer0
+ what Bluejam said about the font being thinner.
- MX_OnD0
I like the second one better, but the "s" should look more "s" like imo.
- bulletfactory0
was this taken down? link doesn't work here
- Bottlerocket0
That link is a bit whiffy
- rename0
(Temp server problems before)
The link is working now.