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- honeydesign0
i think it looks nice and clean - energetic... makes you wanna flip it over - good use of color (even if they were forced upon you).
- JG_LB0
yellow = fast food not healthy food to me..
what do i know.
- kyl30
looks nice, but while micheal's name is pretty long, I'd be careful if there's a longer name. It might extend too close to the top edge
- jteore0
I dont think you need the stroke around "optimum" and "food". You made them black, they will stand alone just fine. Your lines on the outside of the circle should line up with the ones inside. Fade them out like you did to the ones on the back. Also feel that your info on the back can be down and to the right a bit. Isnt Optimum foods more organic related? If so, maybe rethink the color of the card to something more natural as apposed to meathead yellow
- dibec0
nice. colors ain't that bad.
one thing though. if you can ... the star-radial-burst-background on the front ... see if you could run it from left to right on the back. it would make it a little more cohesive i think. nothing major at all.
nice work. =]
- doesnotexist0
optimum food is not organic food, although you can have that option, that is not the main focus.
again, i agree with you all on the colors, i dont know how many times i have tried to impress on them that they arent good for what theyre doing.
good point about a longer name breaking the card edge. also about moving the info's position lower/rightish.
thanks! more?
- doesnotexist0
ah the only thing about the optimum food offset is because it looks funky on the edge of the logo glow, being close to black and all.
- doesnotexist0
dibec, i was just pondering that.
- dibec0
haha.
it's one of those small things. depends on the flip =P
- doesnotexist0
indeed, did it on some other cards the other day. definitely makes a nicer flow.
- doesnotexist0
plus if you hold the card up to a light, it doesnt look funky.
- dibec0
i think it is fine either way. if that card is print on good lb paper and no gloss. i think it will be sex. ;)
- doesnotexist0
unfortunatly im going to have to try and talk him out of the gloss.
gah!
- dibec0
sometimes they do not know better. go for semi-gloss if he is pushy.
- doesnotexist0
indeed, but they always seem to think they do.
always talkin about his 'designer' friends saying this and that. psha
- dibec0
ain't that the truth. ;)