logo critique
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- breadlegz
Heya
Looking for opinions on some logos i've created for an interiors company:
http://breadlegs.com/clientproof…
cheers
- jevad0
lovely
top right
- Goozebump0
the right column is the one ill use andd g o with either the blue and grey or light green and gray combo :-)
- ewo0
top left for me
even if it is a little spermy
- jevad0
hahah ewo - thats what came to my mind also!
- fear0
right column, any colour - looks like a bath in an architechts drawing.
left is spunk...
- breadlegz0
lol
cheers.
do you think th colours are ok?
- e-pill0
i liek the red one in the middle
i liek the green one top right
i liek the yellow one bottom left
:)
- Crouwel0
left one.
makes me think of semen though!
- TResudek0
Right-hand column. Any of the colors work for me.
I think you need to tighten up the type though. everythign should line up on the right. As you have it now the smaller text is wider than the name. Also, think how much nicer it'd look if the center of the "&" was directly below the stem of the "Y".
TR
- kld0
on the left I read the D as a S.
on the right, looks pretty good accept the little corner on the lower right of the mark bugs me. The type could use some work as was mentioned earlier. maybe the second and third lines of type have less leading
- BrigadeDesigns0
I guess I'm the only one who likes the middle column.
- Crouwel0
i just noticed the third column. should have said so. :)
- version30
nothing says bathroom to me
- leftwave0
POOP
howabout that?
- leftwave0
sorry, i'm in a stupid mood today.
as for your logos, i like the 2nd and 3rd columns. the 1st column just leaves me wondering about what i'm looking at. all 3 color schemes are nice.
i agree with the other posts, tighten up and align the text.
nice work.
- kld0
didn't see the third column. better than the other two, IMO
- Goozebump0
hahah didnt see the thid column either yah use the top right one on 3rd column.
- Scottizzle0
Nothing says kitchen or bathroom about that logomark. When someone looks at a logo, you want them to know what the company does without reading a word, or at least have an idea. What if you had more of a "blueprint" look to the whole thing, or something...the marks there now just dont say anything.
Good luck!
btw, they dont look horrible or anything, but you should really try to create a mark that just SCREAMS DUDLEY KITCHENS AND BATHROOMS!
=)
- agentfour0
looks like a guitar pick to me
- Scottizzle0
yea, or the microsoft "plays for sure" mark. ;D