Layout crit
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- Fariska
http://www.magmaedia.com/ntstuff…
Just a draft, but let me know your opinion about type image and whatelse.
Good Night Folks
- doesnotexist0
first off, post it online as a gif or jpg. d/l-ing pdf is teh ghey.
second of all...type is weak, that blue makes me bored. spacing isnt so great. keep pluggin' away! you can do it!
- Fariska0
about structure?
Oh wtf, it's late, tomorrow i must be at work against webby shites
*ran out
- |oo|0
MORE COWBELLS AND WHATNOT!
- BonSeff0
type image and whatelse is perfect
dont change a thing, dont even get the hires photo.
"Reach out the decision-makers"
i don't know what that means but it's awesome
- |oo|0
Just kern the dots in your urls and, done!
- Kiko0
There is nothing there. Just a ohoto and a few lines of text, how about some editing
some headers, some straucture, some modiles to hold your text..Its very weak at the moment.
- Witt0
cmon guys... don't forget your first experiences.
it needs depth all the way. one way to do that is to avoid the cliché of having the slogan matching the image. the reader gets off the poster in 1 second.
make harder relations of meaning to get people hooked to it.
- Kiko0
also the spacing between works is way too much
keep on dude
- jevad0
wtf pdf?
- jevad0
I find the type and image rather dry to be honest
Experiment a little more
Open up the grid
Fuck with it
- Soler0
yes, fuck with it. Give it graphic interest. flood some color.
- toe_knee0
make it more better
- piperboytoy0
I am usually pretty nice, but this is really ugly!
there is no style to this. Looks like you did the layout in word or something.
- who0
IMHO,
Sorry, :( but I don't like it........You need better photo, better font case, better colors........ You need power in all this....
Choose a better photo. The point on this page is that you want to give the feeling that something is flying high......... In this photo, I can hardly see the bird, and the first thing that I focus is the rock.....
Try to find a better font case, this is too boring. Try something that is not so old fashion
You need more colors......
- Fariska0
Ok, thanks.
as I said was a draft. Today i'll be on it more accurately (in fact tomorrow morning m ust be finished) . And this is my first serious try on print.