site crit please
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- kbags
Hey guys, just working through some ideas, slight variations here and there. Something just isn't sitting right with me about it all though.
A:
http://www.instinctmedia.com/cli…B (ignore little red box):
http://www.instinctmedia.com/cli…
- airey0
C as the homepage and A or B as content pages yeah?
i like it.
- kbags0
yes.
really? thx..
- Nairn0
Does it really all have to be in Flash?
I prefer the darker one - but thematically, it's not really my bag.
The pxl background's cool - but I might expect a bit more 'street' grit in the foreground.
- Witt0
i can't find any reason why the fraktur titles on the left should be bigger than those two in the right column. importance is already there by table width and the photo. somehow it breaks the title reading.
apart from that it has a cosy feel (for those in the genre).
- kbags0
More please...
- BonSeff0
im bummed you didnt go with the 3 legged dog
it looks good though
- kbags0
lol, yeah me too bonseff; i used your pitch too, but as soon as they saw the diamond-encrusted logo, they were lights out.
thx