like.no.other
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- mevsthem
who wrote the script?
- k770
shakespeare
- build0
Fallon [London].
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- MrZinky0
err the link tells me no file found...
- liquid0
whoops.....I started another thread on it....sorry for the repost didnt see this
- mevsthem0
coo, i really liked that script.
- digdre0
Invalid link here
- Duane0
404 Not found.
- rabattski0
i think the traffic was a wee lill bit too much.
- mogwai0
i found it to be very uninspiring anyway.
- build0
Thanks mogwai.
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- liquid0
traffic? or link no worky?
- mogwai0
I'm sorry. That was not helpful.
I kept scrubbing forward to see if something else was going to happen. Pacing too slow.
The narration reminds me of 1999/2000. the whole "We are not just any company , we are ___ . We are more than a brand...."accompanied by on screen text that follows the narration. Maybe a little too follow the bouncing ball'ish which can be quite annoying for the viewer. maybe to redundant?
Back to pacing, it could use more variety, quick vs. slow, rather than everything happening at one monotonous pace.
It could use some breaking up of the pictorial space.... everything lives in a 2D space right in front of the camera, with a few exceptions
(when the idea graphic kinda explodes, that was nice, breaks up that space more). We needn't be reminded that we are looking at a 2d screen.Again, I aplogogize for the harshness without explanation, very un professional.
- mrsparkle0
yup, looks like you've been told.
- mrsparkle0
I was wondering why build would link such a boring site in the PBS.
- liquid0
can we please get a link that works?
- mrsparkle0
the toddlee that is.
- build0
I'll post it on our site [if we ever get it finished!].
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- Duane0
The component posts are cool. Nice to see where you've been.
- mogwai0
thanks for the nod in the PBS build!
- magicpatch0
its more than a video :-)