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- elms
these are invitations for a jewellery gallery. they are opening an exhibition called "granaat", what means both garnet and grenade
crit and any suggestions are welcome:
http://www.baas.ee/elms/agalerii…
- canuck0
the gem looks like a soccer ball.
- elms0
yea, the garnet unfortunately looks like football. guess i have to change it a bit more
- vburo0
the first!
keep the lines thin and minimal.
that'll fit the subject better..gives it more that exclusive feel..
have you tried a black background? i know it's a lil cliché.. but it might work..
- vburo0
funny... granaat = grenade in dutch. i assume it's the same in estonia, as you also have an exploding one in the suggestions there hehe..
- elms0
i liked the first one too, but the client said that it looks too camp/kitch...
not enough money, so it will be 2 colours - dark gray + orange
any more suggestions? - im a bit tired - 3.21 AM here
- elms0
funny... granaat = grenade in dutch. i assume it's the same in estonia, as you also have an exploding one in the suggestions there hehe..
vburo
(Apr 24 05, 17:14)mhmh, same, yes.
- kbags0
I like the top half of the first one...
then take that and pair it with the second half of the last one...
then take the logo from the top half of the last one and replace the logo on the bottom half and get rid of the underscore so it's just the gem like so [ * ]
Not sure if it will work, but that's what I'd try next...
Sweet work though, very tasteful!
- vburo0
if you are ok in printing shades/rasters you could also use black and orange right?
i must say i am not feeling the others too well... :/
- elms0
its going to be silk-screen printing
- elms0
eh, the gallerys logo has to be somewhere, can't replace it that way...
and also - the font is too big, isn't it?
- vburo0
silk screen.. ok. good choice.
- elms0
- paraselene0
i like the first and third ones. the exploding gem is pretty clever.