poster crit ?
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- brains0
no one in the mood today ? come on, rip em apart.
- dippy0
I like the first one, although the mini spray drips on the bottom of the word bubble are really bugging me -- they're overused anyway, and your poster doesn't need them.
You ruined the second one with the diagonal pink stripes. Enough with the cliches, do something that comes from YOU.
- visible0
basic hiearchy!!!!
The bubble and the horsey compete.
simplify first :)
- brains0
yeah, I was worried about the pink stripes, ( ahaha. and the paint drips. ) I don't know. I'll keep stabbing at them. thanks though, keep them coming.
- e-pill0
i got high before i saw this for creative purposes only...
from what i remember, on the first one the cut off font like dollar bill font AWESOME still see it in front of me like a bright light in my eyes!
the pink was wack! but the image behind wasnt. keep going! its fun! since you are rushing, why not rush some for for fun!
- Beech0
I agree with dippy about the pink stripes, i think you have the general vibe for the poster, just needs more work.
- agentfour0
make the bubble more 'animated'. by that i mean make the outline of the speech bubble thicker in some places and thin in others. It may not be the look youre going for but i think it would look cool.
- brains0
thanks dudes.
what about colors. I am lost. I want to incorporate some colors in here. ah well. going to go prepare some KD and think about it.
- e-pill0
blk/ white with touches of red...go see sin city!
- brains0
you know e-pill. that's what my original idea was.. not because I saw sin city, but just because.
- spongebob0
i can't tell if it's a dog or a horse.
- brains0
yeah, it kind of looks like a german shepard.. I know.
- version30
the design aestetics are all cool with me, i like the second one
but the copy is way small as far as the info
imo the venue and date should be much larger
- e-pill0
i like the first one as is...but do more...and batman black white red comes to mind as well as grendel black white red or a newspaper with dead fish in it black white red.
- brains0
well, they will be on 11x17. I will make some changes on the date. I don't know. the pink stripes ? bah. I'll do some more later.
- rabattski0
oh god, like black, white and red is the new thing? it's just a good color combination that works really well and has been around since the begining of mankind.