website crit
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- byronicles
this is a site in progress for brooklyn experimental noise label Palsy. This welcome page isnt clear, which I need to fix but if you find your way in, let me know what you think. THis is my first website. I'm a student at parsons, dont cut me any slack.
http://beard.dialnsa.edu/~Byron/…
- blaw0
view > source is a tough way to have to enter a site.
got a typo here:
"Well, it looks liekk this website is closing in quickly on"kept looking for how to shut the audio track off, but couldn't find it.
i don't dislike or love the site, but you definately need to address a few items if this is going to work.
- RevoltOne0
A easy to find enter button would be nice.
- usrper0
whats your major
i grad arsons last year
- fate_redux0
lol, you really credit this design to your education at Parsons? Are you first year or fresh out of highschool or what?
- Dr_Jay0
I don't think you seriously want a crit.
If you did, you'd provide a link to the actual site... instead of saying "if you get in..."
Design is about communication... not frustration.
- easy_target0
dude i gave up didnt even go in all i saw was a page full of squares!!!!!
IMO people anit gonna hang around on your site looking for away in......so i would say back to the drawing board as far as your design goes
- fate_redux0
lol @ iframes with borders.
- Dr_Jay0
you stink
- Dr_Jay0
sorry... you said not to cut you any slack.
- version30
the site sucks
the mystery entry image could at least be centered
what are you going to do with the blog entries once they begin to add up its obvious this isnt dynamic
popups suck in general but for html content is even worse
- kodap0
it's so 60's
- jevad0
" Design is about communication... not frustration. "
In all honesty - it's terrible.
- bk_shankz0
Man why don't you guys roll him around in the tar and rip a pillow over him.
- usrper0
guys, i really dont think its terrible. of course it needs modification, but you are just cruel.
trust me. if you have been to parsons, YOU KNOW terrible.
- tripface0
no enter button...way annoying.
- mrock0
Holy MP3 compression Batman!!! Like the music but it sounds like crap and I agree to all the othe stuff left from the past peeps.
- byronicles0
okay, gang, all thats fair. although saying simply that my site stinks is not helpful. I didnt post on here to just get cut down. Liekk I said, Its my first site.
So to defend myself,
a) the mp3 compression was a joke between the label owner
and myself, not going to appear on the finished site, along with all the dummy text. Cmon, do you really think I dont proofread? I put this up to get feedback long before anyone else will see it.
b) the entrance/popup window was only to learn a particular method, and as I mentioned in my original post, needs revision.
c) I started on this with about a month and a half of web design experience. I'm not straight out of high school, but novice fer sure.
d) in what browser are there borders around my frames? I never saw them in safari or IE.
Thanks to those that gave real input. To the rest, fuck off.
- byronicles0
Oh yeah, and next time I put something up on here, someone remind me not to say "dont cut me any slack".
- taragee0
u need to clarify the hierachy...
y did u do that to like my fave wu song?! :P