Site and card crit
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- DragKng
This is something I did up for my sister. She is a freelance make-up artist and photographer in Miami right now. She wanted something simple to highlight her diverse work.
http://www.seethroughhead.com/mi…
Suggestions? Ideas? Tear it up boys and girls
- jevad0
n00b!
- nick0
b00b!
- Dancer0
It all feels very clunky and BIG.
Strip it down and start with the logo (dunno if you designed this?) your positioning of type is not considered. Look at the relationships between each facet.Also where is.....oh hang on..... your navigation is .... an after thought?
- DragKng0
Thanks for the suggestion about the type...
NB - it's just a first draft for the site...I am having trouble knowing what to do as far as the nav goes, the site is mostly Make-up (this is the high profile stuff) but she is heading in the direction of photography so I don't want to limit the scope ... and I am thinking I should shorten the "select a picture" area at the top...??