site crit if you have time
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- a-train0
needs something at the very top on the copper bar. more design, maybe an animation if you havent alrady planned that or maybe information geared twords the company.
- jevad0
It's a bit....flat. V Clean...but flat...make the bottom sections stand out a little more - maybe a color header and try a different type for the menu.
I lifestlye shot with someone using a product that has duracell batteries might be good
- johndiggity0
black bg, for sure.
- nice-land0
well, if it needs to relate to the current campaign(in the U.S.) then it's a little off base.
otherwise, I think the bg ground color is too fleshy. It also feels retro in some way.
- forcetwelve0
sorry - it's for AUS market. brief was to be different from US market. might try black bg...
- Beech0
I like the retro feel but agree that the background colour is a bit "fleshy"
Jevad: Isn't that duotone with the chick and a camera a lifestyle shot?
I think it will be great when its finished.
- johndiggity0
i thought the pink bunny was energizer?
- forcetwelve0
too much time you have my man! i like it - i've pitched it!
- BonSeff0
you'll be responsible for a great movement my man!
we're gonna take the stache back, and we owe it to one brave designer!raaaaaaaaaaahhhhh
- BonSeff0
seriously, it works as a nice corporate site. i would only add as a consumer, that the product and tech information tabs should be the most noticable. unless it is a site for investors or consumer complaints (in the nav order that is)
and also, yeah, whaddup with the pink bunny?
- nice-land0
there you go!
- forcetwelve0
cheers BonSeff (and all the rest of you)...some good points for me to think about.
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wabbit is definately from duracell here in australia? maybe he's a double-ended bunny? *ooohhh*
- forcetwelve0
weird... he's a shit lookin bunny though you have to admit! he looks like he was set on fire and put out with a chain!
- jevad0
Jevad: Isn't that duotone with the chick and a camera a lifestyle shot?
yeah but it's waaay too knocked back.
you want crisp photography that is full of life, excuse the pun, for a site like this....
- shotoshi0
Yeah, I thought the bunny was energizer too. Bunnies are cool though.
- kbags0
I like the black background but I'd flip it so it starts black at the top of the page and fades as you go down...
Nice design otherwise!
- shotoshi0
I think the little arrow buttons in the 3 footer panels get lost against the orange bg.
Try green. Green also symbolises 'Go'