biz card
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- texascris
Hi !
i'm designing my new biz cards, this is what i have so far.
any suggestions, ideas, critic will be welcome.
thanks for taking some time
cheers.
- cyberthug0
Pretty Cool. I would make it a bit less distressed so that it reads better, but I think it's a cool idea considering that you're not even in Texas. Maybe put some crossing revolvers in there and perhaps a star. Y'know Texas is the "Lone Star State"?
- kbags0
Hey there, I really like it! Crits: the logo on the back of the card appears tough to read. The logo also seems small on the front...beyond that and a lack of address, it's great!
- grayhood0
i like the cow skull logo, but i am not crazy about the blackletter type below it. i would either get rid of it or change the font. the outline around it isn't helping.
the info side looks good, clean simple.
- Spix0
i like...not the lemon green text though.
- texascris0
thanks... i'll do some more comps considering you crits... keep them coming!!
- Rand0
I like it a lot.
If it was me, I'd put just the skull on the skull side, and no skull on the other side, but that's me, not saying you should. Would try to arrange type so it doesn't make such a neat "v" ramp. Maybe your name and title'descrip to the left and the other stuff in another column to its right or sumthin, or the name/title up where texascris is and the rest with the texascris where te rest is
- mr_snuggles0
I like it, but the typestting on the back needs to be re-thought. The "stepped" setting of the type doesn't really work. Maybe try setting your info in 2 or 3 columns so everything isn't flying off the left of the card.
- airey0
great.
also, be careful of how close the type is to the edge on the reverse. i'd make sure it's at least 5mm in so the printers don't fuck you.
love it though.
- tymeframe0
i don't understand the name
- Dancer0
I like it but as Snuggles said your card looks unbalanced on the back.
I know this is a long shot but have you tried centring the text so it reflects the skull on the otherside...just a thought!
I agree with the readability of the logo as well, perhaps drop the keyline and the drips...
Nice look though
- texascris0
ok. so i made some changes, taking some of your suggestions
here you go..
http://www.mi-pagina.cl/texascri…
cheers
- airey0
my 2 cents: 4-b but with the skull instead of the star.
tops.
- johndiggity0
i like 4 with the back from A. why use arial? maybe a nice western face on the front with your logo, with the screened effect you got going on?
- airey0
i dig the whole blackletter font, it's good. 4 does look good though.
- grayhood0
i like 4A or 4C. nice work. i like the green color more then the blue or orange.
- liquid0
4a but do a knockout for 4..... I think it would give it some pop if one side was almost full color..
try 4 but knockout in black and then knockout red....using red from C... and try green too same as A
do A layout with C colors ....keep the current ones up with the new choices..
- airey0
yeah, the skull reversed out of the green would be pretty nice.
- texascris0
thanks for all the input you guys, they have been really helpfull
liquid: sorry to ask, but what do you mean by do a knockaout?
i dont' understand what you mean.
cheers
- texascris0
i think this is my biggest thread so far.
carry on.
cheers
- liquid0
whatever is black is white ...and the knockout color of the surrounding area would be as I said.....but just the skull is white in this case.....
try both combos of red and green...and try red for A.....