Xmas Card Crit
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- k0na_an0k0
try shrinking the text a bit. some negative space would be nice. make the logo smaller as well and pull in the glow a bit.
maybe change the photo too. it's nice but almost dreary or lonely ya know.
nice start though.
- tim5250
the painful truth?
start over.
- tymeframe0
mmm
- tim5250
i'd almost like to see the whole right side of the card go. just use the image of the tree and sky as your background with some cool type treatment.
- tim5250
i meant left side.
- ganon0
looks like a billboard...smaller text, maybe have the headline in a 'holiday' script....
- gruntt0
keep it simple.
a tit with a wreath around the nipple.
- swollenelbow0
give yourself some inner bleed. spacing, you have 4 elements in there and they seem like they are crowded.
- MrDinky0
i would lose the photo..
seems tad Walmart card like..
- shellie0
that last one i immediately thought of an erect penis.
- shellie0
but maybe thats cos i just read the sex thread.
- tymeframe0
mmm.....how you doin' shellie
:)
- MrDinky0
shellie
you always think about erect penises anyways..
- shellie0
yeah. i like my christmas lights nice and erect.
- b_magallanes0
Your overwhelming the recipient with the imagery. Needs something much more simple... and subtle. Maybe a nice simple illustration of a tree? Do something more 'handmade' with a personal feel and much smaller type. Maybe even handwritten type? Keep us posted.
- flickster0
I think the logo is too big, in all of them...
- mr_snuggles0
tymeframe you should check out the "another xmas card" thread for another way to look at this project. The other one is very well executed...