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- blaw0
maybe increase the smaller type size so that the downstrokes of the "d" in "do" and the "t" in "want" line up with the bottom of the top part of the "?".
- grayhood0
is the shit going to be red?
is the name of the band going to appear on the shirt?
i am down with the design but i would think a different color, as far as i know young girls are still into pink, and maybe the name of the band should appear on the back, or sleeve???
- gruntt0
what blaw said.
the overall concept is quite good.
well played.
- blaw0
seems like it would be a good design for the target audience, btw.
- Chimp0
Looks very corporate. perhaps a different type face or hand drawn?
- agentfour0
i think round the ends of the question mark. like helvetica rounded or sumthing.
black on pink would be better too. black and pink is the new black.