stationery crit
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- fate0
It's ok, might try to work some black in there, particularly for type.
- kld0
trying to stick to two colors. Layout?
- kld0
demographic is 35-60+ wealthy home owners (soccer moms) and healthy living advocates
- 3rror4040
looks good... the grid thing going and the internation style shit... too overdone i wud say but well ...
loose the leader lines at the bottom of the stuff... the small white ones.. see how it looks..
but then... who am i to talk about design... i suck
- motormel0
layout looks good and straightforward to me- but i agree about the white lines at the bottom of the card. they are too close with the phone no.s and compete visually/get confusing.
- kld0
... the white lines at the bottom of the card. they are too close with the phone no.s and compete visually/get confusing.
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thanks, thats a good point. do they work for the other pieces. The lines are part of the branding. I know it is pretty straight forward but the demographic is older so I was going for clean.
- kld0
lost the lines on the card. going to bed. thanks!