Could I get a crit?
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- grymes0
Damnit. should=school
- spendogg0
give us more options and explain your thinking
- abizzyman0
ooooooooo...
i likey... it's so flowery and nice - yet I can tell that it's a box of some sort w/four lids... yes?
dig the script... love that...
... but the text below it could use a little toning down. Perhaps a san serif w/a thinner stroke?... and smaller copy too? I think that script needs to really sing - and the font below it is a bit obtrusive.
- JazX0
very nice work IMO.
- stevii0
what does it smell like when you scratch it?
- manila-gorilla0
i like it.. try one with a smaller red four-lid symbol .. it looked at first glance to me like almost two different logos and position somewhere... just imo... nice start
cheers
- grymes0
I am a product designer judging by my education but always found an interest in VC so I wanted to start a packaging company. Hopefully that's what this studio will primarily do. The logo came from the metaphor of an open box. You see the "lids" in the logo. Thats the direct meaning. Indirectly, just thinking "outside the box", opening things up.
- aliendn0
its unique i think, reminds me of a flower, dont know if thats what u intended...dig the script font
- JazX0
it smells like a digital flower
- heavyt0
wow. i like the box, but i had a different interpretation.
i thought that it was a can light, like in the theater. they usually have 4 shades like that, so i was thinking that it was like a fresnell or something, and then assumed that you did film.
guess i was way off base.
TR1
- aliendn0
dude i say stay with the logo if it provokes such unique interpretations from different peeps.
- lilbabyarm0
the name is a lil bizarre... but I like it. it's coo.
- lilbabyarm0
the name is a lil bizarre... but I like it. it's coo.
- Soler0
I don't think that the icon looks much like a box open.. I mean I see ehat you are doing but I don't think it has enpugh visual reference...
Since packaging is 3D, I would suggets taking your mark and then making it a 3 dimensional object. Its a nice 2D start.
Also, the logo text is a bit "off the shelf" and could use some customization. And i don't really did Futura or whatever you chose for the tag. It is too bold. maybe a fine serif or something scripty.
Hope that helps!
- manila-gorilla0
i like the 2nd from the top on the left (the green one)
post some with squared corners for the flaps too.. might look more 'box'
- Jie_P0
Hi mate, i like the first to the left. as i think it looks more like a box than the rest.
I knew it was a box from your first picture you posted and you've kept it simple with a minimum of colours, which is sound.
Cheers.
- -kappa-0
check your email....
- Help0
grymes if thats a box why is the bottom white?