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- iDp0
dont all respond at once or anything..
- DutchBoy0
nice.
the text left and right of that divider should have more space... be more moved towards edge, me thinks.
also the star on the clowns face looks a bit too geometric... make it more look like it really is on the face.. (more curvy)..
also why the eyes etc. in such a light stroke? how does it look when somewhat darker/heavier??
- johndiggity0
make the headline bigger. it looks kind of empty up there. maybe some printers ornamnets sprinkled liberally.
- iDp0
the bastards are asking for almost an inch of bleed so thats why a lot of it looks cramped, once its printed and cut it should look nice and full like it's meant to be.
Dutch I think you are right about the star...more I look at it now the more I see it needs some more wrap, and I'll play with the eyes too...might look better darker.
- iDp0
fixed...leaving the office...eyes bleeding
- kodap0
Your piece looks very nice and eye catching, however I'm going to leave you with some some points i'd like to see you make to improve this:
-the Blue on the top - "rock/rodeo".. maybe replace with the same stroke / effect and colors as '2' and '3' numbers bellow.
-the date, use numerics. and bigger- people liek to know WHEN the event is it gonna take place on a first sight.
- align the red circles
- the clown's nose should be round.. well, in Portugal they are.
- I like the Tv, but doesn't reflect the bi-dimensional aspect of the whole piece.. (maybe smaller and with a white stroke -yes) check the antennas and the cable.
that's it. yeah, I like it
- k0na_an0k0
outstanding.
consider it ripped.
you will see it in my portfolio shortly. hahaha.
jk.
really nice.