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- zedvox
http://gladstone.uoregon.edu/~at…
those are the two drafts i have right now. I know they are are similiar.
Is it clicking with you guys? or should i start over?comments.thanks.
- fifty500
i like the 2nd one way better but i still think the text is too low.
- johndiggity0
drop the please. it's to authoritarian to be asking politley. try breaking the text with the image too.
- grayhood0
thats blood dripping right? it looks too strait where it starts on the left wing. or if its not blood, i totally missed what it is suppose to be.
other then that i like the look of the left one, thought the right is easier to read.
- b_magallanes0
What kind of poster will it be? Screenprint?
- fresnobob0
Looks like a shitty vector trace of a bird with maybe something trying to be blood dripping, but its only inside the lines.. and some shitty typography thats way too polite for something to try and get me to vote. basically it sucks, so start over or work the hell out of it.
- zedvox0
50- thanks man...but i kind of like the empty space...but still muckign around with the type..so i'll play around.
john- i am using the please more as a plea than to be polite...but you are right...it is not going that well with the image.....
graybabe- thanks for the blood drip thing..i'll smooth it out..i showed the left one last night and people were not digging it....
and i was planning to put up the 11X17 pdf file for download for people to download, print however they wish and just spread it.....would love ot have it screen printed but no money no equipment.
cool thanks so far guys....i know the type is buggy....still playing with it....
- nick0
the type is too low.. and its not really doin it for me..
make that shit look more uncle sam
- iDp0
Rosewood is the new black!
- johndiggity0
try some here:
http://www.trumanlibrary.org/mus…
- TResudek0
second one... Gotta work with the text though. Bigger and with more margin. b_mag has a good idea with the cropping (although i think we could all use a little less Fette Fraktur).
TR