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- blackspade0
woah
err
what is it fer
- BonSeff0
the avenger type is a bit heavy. make it thinner and id say you have an A1 class poster
- fate0
Well it's shit design and boring art.
- Peter0
It's trapped out, I think.
- xcissor0
okay, i re-uped it. check it again...i think its good now.
- fate0
argh! Don't mess with the typeface spacing!
- andre_andreev0
what is this for?
did you make the vagina with maggets?If so, I have to give you credit for rocking with your cock out. It definatelly caught my eye. The type needs work, but you're definatelly milking the shock value!
- magicpatch0
quit making it look like shit and vulgar
- fate0
The shock value is so devoid of any direction or purpose, that's why I said it was shit design.
and it's so pointless it borders on art that is simply their to invoke SOME sort of emotion without cause or care, that it's boring.
- BonSeff0
thats right Mmmpatch
dis a fambly sho
- magicpatch0
what type of demographic are you communicating this message to?
nerdy boys who dont get girls that like to eat maggots? if so then great job
- blackspade0
thats why I asked in my first post
cant comment otherwise
- robotron3k0
reduce the font size like 75%,
right or left justify
move up maybe somewhere closer to top
maybe helvetica lowercase,
65% black for color
put the date of the event
seperated by periods...
presto, your done.
- xcissor0
its all printed. the assignment was for my communication design class. my teacher is really into the whole shock thing, and this is our first project so he's really pushing it. its a poster for a book...the black dahlia avenger. if any of you have rread it you might understand the image a little more. i would post a picture of the final product, but i have 5 hours of sketch homework to start in on and art center isn't all that lenient with anything.
- nick0
i hate it
maybe if i had read the book i might understand it, but this doesn't much make me want to pick it up either eh
- stewart0
what's the point of the fake pussy?
i'm sure you couldn't find a real one.
- nick0
zing!
- jg_20
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhha! stewart is da man!
- jevad0
fairly vulgar and devoid of any cognitive emotion
- forcetwelve0
hey semora - i did a quick mod to your poster and emailed it to you - along the lines of what the guys have posted... i think your type needs tohold the thing together - not just be an addition to the [gasp!] image...