my new logo
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- JoshClancy
htto://20inchbmx.com/analogy.jpg
now hate me or love me just critique it and hug me.
- _salisae_0
pretty. what is it for?
- JoshClancy0
new project www.theanalogy.com
- fate0
Hearts are for girls. Are ou a girl, Josh?
- _salisae_0
doesn't load for me
- JoshClancy0
no i am a boy, and i too have a heart.
- _salisae_0
oh! tough guy "fate"
- josimarX0
the strapline being first(left) is a little weird and the line itself is very up it's own arse(pretentious) and doesn't explain anything to me. The typography is nice though.
- phatlee0
how about having the heart as part of the y?? It looks a little odd sitting there
- rasp0
is the whole thing the logo?
try reducing it down to 30 or 40mm josh and then see if you can even recognise / read (or even understand the wanky tag line)
werd
etc
- JoshClancy0
sorry guys I did not clarify this but its just the part with analogy and the heart that is my actual logo....
and i tried placing the heart on the y .... looks gross.
Thanks Keep em comin.
- JoshClancy0
okay i took the left side crap out and now its just raw logo
xoxo.
- glenroy0
what does the heart represent to the client? just curious. have you tried placing it absolutely everywhere? attached to letters/unattached?
- JoshClancy0
does it not look good there?
- rasko40
you know what I see when I look at that?
'I love anal'
- glenroy0
the heart doesn't look bad there - but it doesn't seem to be comfortable there. thats what i hear others saying in response here as well. thats why i wondered if you tried others. sometimes i just go with my first idea and not shift the idea around.
- JoshClancy0
so no go with the logo?
- glenroy0
its a nice clean typefacy. not sure if the heart needs to be connected/overlapping. i wouldn't be scrapping it.
- glenroy0
i think its great. simple and stylish. i hope you're not offended by the critiques of the heart placement - i've just found that if placements create even slight uneasiness with a client then they have to change. its messed up a good logo for me a few times. clients...