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- lovaboy
I posted this a few days ago and hardly got any response. maybe it's cause I didn't use "critique" in the title:) Anyway, here is a site for a fashion designer I'm working on. Comments, questions and suggestions for improvement please:
P.S. I plan on adding intro screen with site requirements, etc., so please don't comment on that.
- warheros0
didnt wait for it all to load as im on dial-up, but, you might want to change the title of the page to something other then "index"
also when the loading bar does its thing in the beginning, how about some way to show its progress? like 2%, 25%, 100%, you get the idea.
also, the little thing hanging on the screen on the left looks weird coming from somewhere above the screen. try getting rid of the string so it jus floats there?
- jevad0
nice flash work
- rasko40
I would just change the type, I dont like courier and I think the type on the menu is a bit big and clunky, maybe something a bit more humanist, doesn't have to be feminine just a little softer/smaller than helvetica in caps.
- lovaboy0
Thanks Rasko. The designer is pretty keen on using Courier, so I'll probably keep that. I'll play around w. the one on the menu though.
- abizzyman0
looks fine to me...
... the only thing I may adjust is kill a few of the _alpha'ed objects...
too many objects w/reduced alpha channels slows down the motion etc. etc.
- jevad0
i'm with the rasko - pixel type on teh menu would look nice
- lovaboy0
Really? Like what would you suggest. What's hot in the pixel world these days?
- fresnobob0
i don't feel the site is any of those adjectives...
- canuck0
I'm kind of slow; what's the connection with the text book?
- grafholic0
Relating to canuck's comment, it's a book, and all the image area (book area) is clickable, making me think i can turn a page or something.
- lovaboy0
It's a book she (the fashion designer) made and hand bound to display her work. Also the site is intended to act as a catalog of her work. So I thought the book would provide a good "context" for the interface.
- Mick0
Nice one - only suggestions is that the scrolling thumbnails on the right when you enter a section - make it more obvious they scroll. This would also act as a way to illustrate there actually is lots more products because at first glance it looks like there are only 10 or so products. Alternatively a "30 items in this category" or something. Just a thought.
- lovaboy0
Thanks Mick. Nice site BTW. Keep up the comments, guys, it's all very helpful.