card crit
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- drbyers0
nice design, but the shade of gray for the fine text is too light.
if people can't read your name and number, then what's teh purpose?
- atomica0
It's not working too well visually. Some things flush left, some flush right, and one aligned center. Then those three rounded corner rectangles.... don't seem to make any sense. Your types hard to read, the cut-off at the bottom/top look doesn't really go to any meaning - although it works on your name visually, it makes the web url look like an error in your design.... meh... has potential though, i'd make the boxes smaller, add some contrast and figure out a better grid for the type?
- heavyt0
not sure what you mean about the alignment.
all of the text aligns right.
i see that there is a contrast problem. i think that it doesnt translate well on to web.
on Velum it is likely to look a lot better.
TR1
- Chip0
don't like it.
looks like my first business card when I left college.
just my opinion.
- mayo0
how opaque is the vellum going to be? i'd be worried about readability the less opaque you go (if that was your plan).
I'm not to hip to your web address aligning to the top of the box.
- scratch0
something about it doesn't say "media design" to me.
Maybe there's too much gray, but then again, maybe you're right and it doesn't translate well on the web.
One things for sure, the type ain't werkin for me.
Overall, it has some potential, but then again, what do i know? make sure you take everyone's advice to heart though, there are some talented people in this forum.
then again....the best advice is to take no advice from anyone......
I have no idea what the fuck I'm saying.
I'm so stoned.
- jevad0
i'd have your name smaller and not butted up to the edge like that - maybe in the middle of the top grey line...same for the web address at the bottom
- ozhanlion0
ya it is ambigious man. break strecht burn I dunno, give it more shape.
- lilbabyarm0
there's nothing unique about it... that's tough to do... but... do it.
- save0
too much going on, simplicity is the key
- jevad0
what save said I reckon
- jox0
what save reckon I said
- armed_rob0
yeah, keep it clean and simple!
- save0
simplicity http://farrowdesign.co.uk/
- Dancer0
farrowdesign.co.uk - and they're still fookin building.....
Shit man they must be building something pretty big!!
- rasko40
dated and crowded.