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- Chip0
4th one is cool.
Also like the second one, not keen on the others for some reason.Perhaps 4 but with some really insane grungy broken font for the title?
- iDp0
as they stand right now I like 2 the best, but I think four has the most potential...i agree mess with the titling and the fonts below that.
- sauerbraten0
3.
- dbox0
i have to agree with iDp.. #2 is solid.
- zach0
3 for sure.
The others don't really imply much besides the way they might dress.
i like the rough drawing - but maybe try it a couple more times to see what happens?
- Duane0
2
- brundlefly0
2
- instantok0
2...4 could work but some of the type needs a bit more personality
- zach0
you guys are crazy.
- Dolan0
Thanks, cool to see the divergent opinions. Agree that 4 could probably use some more type work but I'm pretty much against 'grunge' faces - and I think the mess of the layout needs a clean bit of counterpoint. No one says #1?
- instantok0
i really like the elements in #1 but maybe too much white space for how collagey they feel
- zach0
i'd take #1 if you simply stripped it down to the upper-right type and the yellow behind it.
i don't see any connection between the elements. you don't want a collage to look like a clipart dump.
- meok0
anything but 1.
- BonSeff0
like 4 but hate the font
- shellie0
I really like the cats one.... CATS.
- jrem0
Dig #2
the Midight movies needs to be more prominent.
The head in the background is being overpowered by the text above it. Scale back the overlayed text or scale back the photo.
- tny0
i like the cat one, too
- TwinLobe0
The Cat version (#2) is the strongest by far -- it has a classic modernist simplicity, while the others feel like they're trying a little too hard for the sake of style...
I'm not sure how appropriate it is for the specific band though. How does the "cat" theme play in? Overall it reminds me of a classic jazz album from the 60's.
- Dolan0
The cat is picked up from an element on an existing bit of design the band had. This illustration is a cat getting electrical shock in a psychological experiment on behaviour (not that that's obvious, but I think it's plain that something is going on other than just a cute cat drawing). It's funny, I think people maybe respond to the cat like "I like cats" - which will probably make that the one the band likes. Thanks again everyone for feedback, 'preciate it.
- hellraising0
3&4 have def. potential behind them. Not to sound like a broken record but try doing them again or just fooling with fonts and placement.
hot work though.