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- unknown0
looks like a school harvest festival where the parents are alcoholics!
- monkeyshine0
soooo...is that a good thing? ;)
- surfito0
keep the vodka and get rid of the gifts and fruits.
- surfito0
well, you can keeo the lemon.
- blueless0
Sell the buzz not the bottle
- Bluejam0
The copy 'Among friends' doesn't really fit with the image. I would of associated 'Among friends' as the bottle of vodka in the foreground (as is without the present stuff and fruit) and a party-type scene going on in the background.
Maybe a teaser of bare female flesh to cause a few road accidents wouldn't go amiss.
- unknown0
put the bottle between a pair of tits.
"amoungst friends'
soooo much better.
- ame3yst0
get rid of the fruits, ur selling the vodka right not the fruits
:p
- Blueman0
ha.. yeah .. I'd like to see that one. You would have a trafic jam all day long :-)./
Did you take the photo? Or were you given a bunch to work with?
- Blueman0
ha.. yeah .. I'd like to see that one. You would have a trafic jam all day long :-)./
Did you take the photo? Or were you given a bunch to work with?
- tymeframe0
i'd go with a warmer feel. Green and red compliments.
- Blueman0
HAHA... yeah i like that one .. haha
- stewart0
strange...
tropical fruits in snow?
- unknown0
have some plums to the side of the vodka.
"Vodka...goes down well with a couple of plums in your mouth.
- Bluejam0
You could always go for that retro seventies pitch and find an old photo with 'hipsters' (polo neck wearing/brown pant hugging) at a party...might work with the 'Among friends' tagline which could be played out in a kitsch kinda way.
Or go with KingKezza's idea... that's a good one.
- mrdobolina0
Have a pic of the bottle and the tagline.
Lose your job over it.
- monkeyshine0
ok. so general consensus is that you hate it. It's a given that conceptually its weak, that I can't control, BUT don't you think that if you were driving you couldn't help but notice it?
I didn't take the photo, a photographer did...it was originally in a sleigh and that looked REALLY BAD so I dumped the sleigh.
- DigitalMe0
I think the message is getting lost and doesn't fit with the visuals.
"Among Friends" leads me in two directions:
1. having human faces, enjoying, laughing, etc.
or
2. having one hand giving the bottle to another hand. I think male to female, or vice versa.
just some generic, sterile, duh ideas for ya.