my new site
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- dconstrukt
hey guys working on a site for my new business....
what do you think?
i just whipped this thing up in a couple of hours today.
suggestions? opinions? comments?
b.t.w thanks to everyone that helped me out with the logo yest.
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- sauerbraten0
a business like yours should have strong copy (writing).. team up with someone that has awesome skills in that dept.
keep it clean, i wouldn't display everything on the homepage, but it's not a bad way of going about it.
- Bluejam0
Looks good.
You might want to darken the grey text a bit more..it's a bit too bright and hard to read.
- mrdobolina0
maybe make those cyan table cells a uniform size at the bottom as well.
- unknown0
that inhouse logo came together well, did the client like it?
- F_EddyShears0
Heirarchy... Heirarchy!
- Hypo0
Don Corleone Says Hello
- Antonelli0
looks good. the word 'designed' in the light grey box (for both the inhouse & the personal logo sections) is alone and justified right.
(PC, IE6)
hope this makes sense :)
- unknown0
looks like it took a couple of hours alright!
the work samples look tight though.
- beagle0
sweet! looks realy good.
- dconstrukt0
ou mean for us to use a copywriter for the site?
i've looked at other sites, lie kebler, elixir studio...etc. i havent seen much writing on that.....
as for the heirarchy comment, could you go into some more detail......
i just put the site up, so i realize there are some things that need work.....
rasko, we're gonna show the client the stuff shortly, we are putting together a whole thing for him.....its better to show a whole comprehensive identity than just a logo.....so hopefully he'll like it and we'll get paid for a whole system.
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- sauerbraten0
the short descriptive blurbs about the work could be better refined, namely by a person that works with words.
it would be nice to have a short description of your vision, work ethic, vision, etc. perhaps the same visual weight as your logo
- sisu0
Centered html text is the devil.
- davetufts0
why are the links black and non-links blue? usually it's the other way around.
the logos look nice.
the centered text doesn't work for me either.
- unknown0
ya... aint diggin the gray bottem cells being
1. not even with each other
2. centred textmay your first child be a masculine child
- unknown0
acctually i dont mind the bottem gray box because it has lots of negative space while being centred....
horse heads for everyone