Feedback on this please..
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- MrDinky0
we were at my comment:
"Sebastian with tight jeans? o if he's Seb's friend than its all good...
lol.. dont worry, i bought a whole box..
and case of vaseline.... dont forget your c-ring.. Raul wasnt happy with you cause you had to borrow his... "
- unknown0
just curious phlojo. How old are you?
And this has nothing to do with my critique of your design.
bB
- MrDinky0
sorry if i sounded harsh...
i could go on with crit but i thought others might finish it..anywho.. i wasnt trying DIS you...
just experiment with different fonts.. and i think thats a good start.. ...
- phlojonaut0
fuck off MrDinky and start a new thread for theat bull shit...
i don't fucking care if people rip my work apart... it's cool, i asked for a honest opinion, and i appreciate them...
your are a disrespectfull fuck
- phlojonaut0
ok then....
disregard my last post DInkyi'm 23
- ok_static0
Both the colors scheme, fonts placement and your flash animation ruin your site/idea.
Looks very non-professional to me.
- unknown0
Yeah that him alright. Damn can you beleive he's a size four?!
Cant wait till the next bash! But seiously, about Antoine's idea of inviting a couple homeless guys.. Im not too sure about that. I think we may end up with an odor problem..
- MrDinky0
well, odor might be a problem... Hansol told me that he had few "special" guests over last time.. he didnt have any problem.. but you know its is HANSOL.. "Mr I AM NOT A PICKY MAN" hohoho...
well see what happens. if Antonie wants to clean up and its fine by me.
did you check if my zebra top is in?
- unknown0
This is a totally objective opinion and you can take it for what it is worth. And this little to do and everything to do with your work.
You remind me of me about 3 years ago. 3 years ago, I would create something and throw it in front of somebody. Even before they said a word, they already knew that I was on the defensive. When they did comment, I would take everything they said as a personal cut or offense. Not listening to them objectively and seeing their opinion for what it really was. Good advice for free.
It is tough. It is so hard to not get defensive when sometime is critiquing work that you have poured your time and creative soul into.
This is about image. The image you both create for your work and yourself.
The best piece of advice I can give you is that when you realize that your "self" image is alot more important than your "work's" image, the easier and smoother your creative career will become.
Trust me. I have been there.
As for the work. Keep rockin'. Take this piece. Break it into a 100 pieces. Put it back together in a totally different way. See what evolves. Do it again. And so on. That is what experimenting is about.
Sorry for the long windedness. Just my opinion. Take it or leave it.
bB
- unknown0
Man. where did you buy that zebra top? I have been looking for one for the longest time! Can I borrow it sometimes? It will sooo match my neon green versace hotpants. It nice how it's cut. It lets people see my belly-button percing!
- ok_static0
Well said bB.
- MrDinky0
Hmm.. well I know it will look good on you slut. hohoho...
of course you can borrow it as long as you keep it stain free, remember what happen to my silk shirt? told you not to stand in the middle...and yes you would look killa in that outfit.. love them pants, yuor ass looks so fine!!
- phlojonaut0
bB
i agree with everything you said, and I'm not sure why you are saying that in such detail to me....
i wasn't and still am not on a defensive mode....
i'm not affraid of anyone's comments... on the contrary i encourage them....
i feel very secure about my work, and i know there is and will always be room for improvement....but thanks for the comment
- unknown0
thanks stat.
still trying to live by my own advice. heh.
bB
- phlojonaut0
i just get annoyed with the two gay people which are disrespecting my post here.... the two gay canadians: Dinky and Montreal.... :)
Get a room guys.... make love not war...:)
sorry but i had to say this
- unknown0
WHAT? YOU call ME a... slut!?! AAAS IF!
AND! for your in-for-ma-tion.. That stain was there BEFORE you lend it to me!!
so what time next week?
- unknown0
respect phlojo. steer your post back to the critique of you site design and you'll do fine.
bB
- MrDinky0
EXCuuuuuuuSE ME!
Arent you the one who went down to Palm Springs for week of "ALL YOU CAN EAT"???no no no.. them stainS were there after you were in the middle of the circle-j finalie..
HELLO missy, you wouldnt borrow anything if it had a stain on it!we are gonna start early next week, some of them have to go back to their wives .. Geez...
- neeko0
see, i was gonna add some constructive criricism here then you had to use the term 'canadian' as if it was derogatory... canadians are people too.
i think the site could come off as being pretty slick with different fonts and perhaps a better color scheme. the pseudo earth tones really dont match the feel of the design, imho.