another crit
another crit
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What vb and K77 said.
I would start afresh to be honest. this concept is very standard and has no real angle on it. Why should people use this guy over anyone else?
Also I would work on the logotype together with your mark. How do they relate, what compliments what.
And perhaps work in B+W to start with, colour detracts from the concept.
Sorry but this is just my opinion
Gd lk