Portfolio Critique

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  • maquito0

    Designwise, I agree with uan about the color accents. It's all too plain. Now, more in a more strategic side, I'd suggest reducing the number of projects. Qty ≠ quality. Something pretty obvious is that you have odd spacings all across the site. I'd be more accurate.

    Try reducing the messages you have. I see a lot of things going on at the same time. It's not an easy flow, I get a bit lost. Too many options. Try to choose a max of 10 projects that you consider excellent, write a VERY brief description for each. Make the user follow your story in a more simple, linear manner.

    Don't brag about how many projects and brands you worked in unless you just want to bewitch the kind of clients that only focus on that. (please don't) I'd kill all those logos (50 logos!). It doesn't matter who you worked for, but what you made for them!

    Good job! and thanks for sharing :)

    • Thanks. being in house so long my top projects were very long term and seemed boring versus showing a wide range of images. Will consider how to resolve.phatwrx

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