Site critique please!
Site critique please!
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The last six years I work on defining brands...
should be
For the last six years I have worked on defining brands...
or
Over the last six years I have worked on defining brands
- There are also a bunch of unnecessary commas in that text.yuekit
- Thanks, I will refine the writing, Its something i have been trying to improve over the past 2 years.piperboytoy