Portfolio Critique

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  Is this intended for prospective clients? or employers?

  I think your role in some of the work could be clearer.. The character stuff is really sharp, but how much of that is your direction vs a talented illustrator... It's not immediately obvious when you're looking at the screens -- A bit of descriptive text for each would be great to add a bit of context.

  The shoppa presentation is much stronger than the PaperFold. Suggest you redo paperfold in a similar format. Some of the screens on Paperfold are a bit busy, maybe simplify so you can focus on the details/craftsmanship more.

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  • Thank you for the feedbackKiko
  • Employers. Company I was at just made a whole load of people redundant. So job hunting.Kiko

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