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Out of context: Reply #9
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- freedom0
The main logo at the top feels cramped in that black box. Make the black behind it bigger or maybe transparent background.
Are the titles in gray? They should be black too.
Too many colors in general - too many versions of green/teal, too many gray/black combos. Too many boxes behind type.
Don't like the paper texture. The red stripes make me think 'circus' and the paper looks too 'diy' which isn't a good match.
What's the grid here?:
