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  • ohhhhhsnap0

    GeorgesIV:

    "GrowSolo with it's array of sensors, allows you to grow nutritious food without having to look a green thumb."

    correction: "GrowSolo with its array of sensors, allows you to grow nutritious food without having to have a green thumb."

    You're welcome.

    Seems like the height of laziness to me.
    What if shit hits the fan tomorrow and you can't charge that iPhone/android?

    • sorry to break up the fanboy club. i do like the other product you have with the stroller light. super useful.ohhhhhsnap
    • also didn't Scientists recently find that plants aren't very resilient around WIFI/routers?ohhhhhsnap
    • "allows you to grow nutritious food without a green thumb" is bettermonospaced
    • Without having a green thumb, surely.set
    • 'Having to have' is ridiculousset
    • yupmonospaced
    • both work.ohhhhhsnap
    • "having to have" is grammatically correct, asses. Georges, it's the part I read, have a copy writer check copy thoohhhhhsnap
    • updated text, thanks snappygeorgesIII
    • 'Having to have' is completely pointless. Typical Americanism.set
    • Site's looks really good Georges. Good luck with the idea/project.ohhhhhsnap

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