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Out of context: Reply #6

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  • boobs0

    Looks fairly good. There are a couple of points I'd like to mention, though.

    The spacing within the green navigation bar at the top seems awkward to me. Maybe have the links centered between the two vertical lines? Maybe distribute them more evenly, and not bunch them to the left.

    Anyway, I think that needs adjusting.

    Also, I think that collage of computers, phones, plants, dice, etc., on the home screen is discordant with the rest of the site. It interrupts the unity projected by the rest of the design.

    Also, I wonder if every product picture should be an Apple product? I mean, I know they look nice, and I know your text says otherwise, but people may get the mistaken impression you only work on Apple products.

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