My New Project - Expedition Bureau

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    If you're going to do a pennant, the text should be inside it, distorted to fit the triangle.

    You might consider distorting the EB in this manner. Maybe adding a contrast color to the left edge.

    With the name over the EB pennant, it seems top heavy, I believe it should be below.

    Bureau gets lost on the black background.

    I would try making the stroke width the same for the logo and name when they are paired together if you are going to continue down the pennant outline path.

    You might try making the pennants different colors instead of outlines, then experimenting with color combinations of EB or just knockout the text showing the background color.

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