portfolio review
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- detritus0
Don't like your swirly graphics at all - they're not great and quite actually quite grim and grubby looking.
Having the backing gradient scroll for the main lead image is... not ideal. I appreciate that trans PNGs are heavy, but I'd consider trying to use them on a constantly-gradiated bg.
The mix of section textures is a bit much - I'd keep consistency and just relyon shade changes.
white text on light grey is hard to read.
Your MD's photo is massively off-putting. Yours too, i'm afraid.
"(Does anyone still use it LOL)" - who does this appeal to?
Crossign out Web Design etc and highlighting 'digital kung fu' ill confuse your less savvy users and... i don't know, it..actually..
..overall tone feels like it's trying too hard to be cool without really pulling it off.
Typography's a bit clumsy in places.
imho, it's a great first draft, but I'd simplify it and try and tone down the schpiel.