Photography portfolio crit

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  • NonEntity0

    Hey, this is great!!

    But...If I was being brutal (which I usually am) I'd create more focus with the editorial process. If nothing else for the punters' sake — there's a lot to choose from & I think you'd possibly get more interest from prospective clients that way.

    So I'd say foreground those especially lovely more art-oriented shots in (eg lady selling trad dresses in Guatemala, that kind of thing) and consider ditching the more generic nice-beaches-of-the-world palm tree & surfing shots. Also, maybe avoid mixing b&w with colour or nature with people; segregate the clearly posed shots to one section; etc

    Those Cambodian orphans broke my heart! Also the 'I'm having a baby' section is one big lolsome heart-warming comedy hug & your russian doll bebeh at the end is too much!!

    Am off to chase some Bausch & Lomb glasses 8)

    • Like. I find it so hard to edit my own work.imadesigner

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