Critique required of our flash portfolio.
Critique required of our flash portfolio.
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Critique-wise I'm confused at first glance. I immediately look at the image of the projector and can't figure out why it's there. Also, putting the application icons for pieces of Adobe software might mean something to you, but to potential clients it's just clutter. It might also violate a handful of copyrights.
Have someone who's good at writing look over the copy. You have unnecessary commas all over the place, typos here and there, and the typography could use some design finesse.
The rounded boxes/outlines aren't helping much. Telling someone to "click any image to view" is unnecessary. How about using some of the said Flash expertise to add some interactive cues?
- Thanks, I will take your considerations on board.LetsDesign
- Me too. and I thought it was Wall-E for a second, or a one-eyed robot head.mg33