website crit please

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  • MrNibs0

    It's a good start. I like.

    My thoughs:

    I'm all for padding but this feels a bit freakishly large between columns. I'd rather have the larger image than the gaping void.

    I like the texture although I think the dark texture is a bit big and could be scaled down and back a bit. Perhaps it's because the content type is so small in comparison to the texture.

    Without the hover state the nav is pretty subdued. (i'm fine with it but client might want more prominence)

    Not sure the bottom angle \ line box is needed. Takes away a bit of the top box impact when it gets repeated like that. Although if the address is really important, it certainly calls it out.

    I'd also maybe pick another script font. That one not so good.

    Cheers.

    That's some scary before and after pics!

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