Nice work
Nice work
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- monospaced0
it's actually really cool
I'm just not feeling the overall composition. The negative/positive space is almost exactly the same, which creates a weird tension (to me, at least). Additionally, the type is placed in the tightest spot on the poster, and the chrome-transformer spaceship almost touches the top, but just falls short. Combined, this makes it kinda tense to look at. I also keep expecting an overall shape to emerge, but it really is just a blob, albeit a very nicely illustrated one.
I think with some layout explorations this is headed in the right direction.