first viral crit
first viral crit
Out of context: Reply #20
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- fugged0
Nice work mate.
I think the text is cumbersome to read the way it's spread out. It just doesn't flow for me. I'd almost prefer to see it all in once screen, with the exception of the "Isn't it". Maybe it's because I have no short term memory though :)
- +1 .. the gap is too long, they become words, rather than a sentence.lukus_W