first viral crit
first viral crit
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@janne, re: your note about head-banging
Well it's more for future reference, I suppose. A good twist on the idea would have been you successfully navigating the doorway, but - because you were so focussed on making sure you don't bean yourself on the frame - you snag your foot on something on the other side of the door, and trip. Something like that, just to disrupt the viewer's expectations a bit.