Portfolio Critique

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    I think the face gets tired + weird after the first time we see it.

    It's all very focused for media/television. I think you have some really compelling / provactive photography in there but it's sort of buried at the end of the book.

    Why not intersperse some personal work in between the campaigns a little? I think it would give it better pacing and would give you / client / employer a little breathing room when you're talking through the book.

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    • hmm ok. i figured "the face" might be too esoteric. it's Mario Moreno Cantinflas, a Mexican icon. those who do recognize him get a huge smile. is it worth risking those who wouldn't recognize him?JG_LB
    • recognize him get a huge smile. is it worth risking those who wouldn't recognize him?JG_LB
    • the illustration is also on my business card and website.JG_LB
    • also this book is meant solely for this specific work. i have other pieces and portfolios I'd show depending on the interviewJG_LB
    • job/company i was interviewing forJG_LB
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