Site critique
Site critique
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- bigtrickagain0
seems fine. text on photos seems a tad thick. graphically speaking, the little accents you have on top - starfish, palm tree, orchid frond - take up too much attention whereas the pictures of the villa itself seem like third-place citizens behind the (very large) nav text and the accent pictures. it might be worth exploring making the nav text and photo overlay text smaller, and making the photos bigger.
also, the white space between the photos on the front page is distracting - the strong separation it causes between the photos is not really necessary, i feel. you could probably tighten that up since the photos themselves even if placed next to each other will still look distinct from each other.