Portfolio Crit
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- bigtrickagain0
Everything everyone else already said, plus:
Need more in the about section. That really doesn't say much about you at all. Since you're telling us about your current employer, you might as well put in a mini-resume in there - a list of big clients, where you went to school, etc.
And about the description boxes at the beginning of each section - I understand that you laid it out so that the description and the image below it are both visible and readable, but you make it look like it's a popup obscuring the content. Maybe if you laid those first slides out better in such a way as to make clear that it's an intro slide and integrate the content better with the text...? Maybe like i do on my site: www.tuanhbui.com -> click on any of the "project" links (I don't mean to be conceited!)
One more point - for the work that you did for your agency, it might be nice to make clearer what your role was - were you the sole designer for the print stuff, or were you art-directed by someone? How about the interactive - did you do design and code? Or did you only do the design bit?
Overall though, very nice and slick and chunky (: